Senin, 29 Desember 2008

Revisi Essay Home schooling


Home schooling is very popular in Indonesia. Especially in the big city like Jakarta, Surabaya, etc. Most of people in the big city choose homeschooling as the education. Because homeschooling has many advantages to the people city.

Firstly, the parent can control well their children. They can know all of the activity their children without any trouble. Why? Because, it studies at home. The parent feel efficient time, because they without company go to school and the children just wait for their teacher come to home. And than it is very comfortable for their children. House is favorite place for their children. So the parent are not worried about health’s children, because house is protective place. The last parent can know the schedule and they also can manage the schedule. Usually most of parents confuse about time because the children have job like artist. So, they can manage time for study self.

Secondly, student can more understand well. Crowded can be influence for inelegancy and study need silence. So, study alone is very effective improve them. For example, students have many knowledge. Because teachers give some extra subject matter and extra exercise for their children. Than students is more creative. Teachers give their not only for matters but also play or game to improve the intelligences. So, they have many imagine.

The last, it is without school regulation like formal school like time, schedule, etc. in homeschooling, students without wear uniform like formal school. They can wear T-shirt, jeans, hair color and long hear for boy. Than, students are more relax. They can’t nervous study with their children. They can make joke as like friends.

Homeschooling is very help to the people city. More and more for parents who has children naughty boy, young artist, someone who has serious ill. So, homescooling is very adventages for them.


T : New year

TS : New year is good time to change our life.


I.We have remember what we were do

* We begin to realize our mistake

* we must correct our mistake

* We must ask forgive to everyone who knows us

II. We arrange program our future

*We struggle to always positive thinking

*We must improve our attitude

Many people wait for new year. More and more young man and young women are very happy yard to sow fire flower. They are not only celebrate new year but also they have new life. Because new year is good time to change our life.

Firstly, we must remember what we were do. In the past time we did anything about positive and negative activity. So, we begin to realize our mistake. During a year we have many mistake so we must realize. What we were do last time. And than we must correct our mistake. We correct problem one by one. For example we ask to our friends. Next we must ask forgive to our friends, family etc. Because they always company life us, so we indirect have many mistake.

Secondly, we arrange program our future. We must have it, because it is very important to life. So, we always remember the commitment. For example we struggle to always positive thinking. Positive thinking must be Principe our life. If we always positive thinking we will have many friends and we don’t have enemy. And of course we always protected by Allah SWT. Next we must improve our attitude. Good attitude is key of life success. Good attitude come from our heart selves. For example we must always honest, kind, always help someone who has problem etc.

New year is good time to change everything especially for our heart. But don’t forget we must always remember what we were do. And we must continue our life with our arrange, like we must always positive thinking and we must improve our attitude.

Jumat, 19 Desember 2008

essay homeschooling

Recently homeschooling is very popular in Indonesia especially in the big city like Jakarta, Surabaya etc. Homeschooling is chosen by the parent for their children education. Homeschooling has many positifs effect for the people.
Firstly, the parent can control well their children. They can know all of activity their children without any trouble. It studies at home. the parent feel efficient time, because they without company go to school and children just wait for their teacher come to home. It is very comfortable for their children. House is favorite place place for children. So, the parents aren't worried about health's children. Parent can know schedule and can manage schedule. Most of parents confuse about time for study because the children have job like artist. So, they can manage time for study self.
secondly, student can more understand well. Crowded can be influence for intelligently and study need silence. So, study alone is very effective. Students have many knowledge. Teachers give some extra subject matter and extra exercise for the children. Student is more creative. Teachers give their not only for matters but also play or game or improve intelligences. So, they have many imagine.
The last, it is without school regulation like formal school like time, schedule etc. In homeschooling, student without wear uniform like formal school. They can ear T-shirt, jeans, hear color, and long hear for boy. Students are more relax. They can't nervous study with their teacher. And they can make joke as like friend.
So, homeschooling has many positifs effect. Usually the member of home schooling are naughty boy, young artist, someone who has serious ill.

Sabtu, 29 November 2008

outlite

T : Education
TS : Homeschooling has positifs effect for our students

I The parents can control well
* It studies at home
* It can control the schedule
* It is very comfortable
II Students can understand well
* It can be private
* Students has many knowledge
* Students is more creative
III It is without role formal school
* Students without wear uniform
* Students is more relax
* It has national final examination.

Rabu, 12 November 2008

tugas writing wednesday,12 nov. 2008

Unisma is very strategist place to study university in Malang. The place is not big, and is not small. The location is beside Dinoyo traditional market, and in front of the alfamart. There are many buildings in Unisma. In front of the security office there is A building, this building for ror office center and for class to study. Beside A building there is B building, this building just for faculty office and faculty library. Behind B building there is C building. This building are for class, laboratory language, and also for meeting room. In front of C building there are garden and volly square. Next to C building there building to library center. In front of library center is D building. This building are for S2 class,D3 class, and also S1 class. Between D building and E building is building for computer class. This location is for Hot Spot area. Beside that building is E building. This building is special for Economy Department. To the left of E building are F building and under ground parking area. The east corner is SC building for auditorium. All of the building color are green, and I love so muchstudy in unisma.

Selasa, 11 November 2008

Tugas writing harianq

DR.Harry Alden schedule's is very busy today. The first at 9-11 am. he must read the applicant's resumes. He must know about the applications first before he get interviewer. Next at 11-12 am. he has meeting with the dean. Because he still has assignment. After that 12-1 pm. he has lunch with DR.Davis. They have good relationship and every week they must meet to have lunch together. And than at 1-2 pm. he has interview applicants. Because he need someone to help him. Finally at 2-3 pm. DR.Harry has observe classes. It is very important him, because he need some experience to be good carrier.

Sabtu, 01 November 2008

Revisi kuisq

Succesful students have similiar characters. First of all, they are hard workers. Because students must do exerise from their lecturer, and they must get new information from internet as like every student must has blogger, E-mail, etc. Secondly, they are dicipline. As we know most of students love being absent so much. Students can be discipline, maybe just 5 student can attend that class. Thirdly, thet are active . In that class they must active, it may be talk something to understand and do exercise . And the next they are responsible, for example their lecturer give some homework, we must do on time. So, the key of success are hard work, discipline, active, and responsible.

Approching boys need some strategies
a. We must understand him
b. Just be your self
c. We must be loyal, honest, and friendly
d. We must pray to our god.

Approaching boys need some stategies. Firstly, we must understand him. Because most of boys like to be cared, for exmpleask to him "have you eat?". If he has problem, we must be ready to hear his talk. Secondly, we must be our selves. Most of boys dislike girl who follow artist style. Boys prefer girls who are confident. Thirdly, we must be loyal, honest, and friendly. Every boy always need loyality from his couple, it may be is not make a fair with the other boy. And, if we talk something must be honest as like say " I love you too ". We must be friendly, because every boy comfort whit his couple who is always friendly. And the next we must be struggle pray to unto our god. because if we always pray him, god willing we can do it without any trouble and obstacle. So, we need good strategy to get good boy.

Minggu, 26 Oktober 2008

kuis writingq

1. Successful student have similiar characters
a. They are hard work
b. They are dicipline
c. They are active
d. They are responsible
Successful students have similiar characters. Firstly, they are hard workers. Because students must do duty from their lecture, and must get new information from internet as like every student has blogger, E-mail, etc. Secondly, they are dicipline. As we know students love absent so much. Student can not dicipline all, may be just 5 student can attend that class. From dicipline we can get good value. Thirdly, they are active. In that class they must active, it may be talk something to understand and do exercise. And the next they are responsible, for example do exercise by themselves. And may be their lecture give some homework, we must do on time. So, the key of success are hard work, dicipline, active, responsible.

2. Approaching boys need some strategies.
a. We must understand him
b. Just be yourself
c. we must be loyal, honest and friendly
d. We must pray to our god
Approaching boys need some strategies. Firstly, we must understand him. Because most of boys like if he is care by her, for example ask to him "have you eat?, what are you doing?" . If he has problem, we must be ready to hear his talk. Secondly, we must be ourself. Most of boys dislike girl to follow artist style. Boys more like we do ourself, and our attitude are not follow the other one. Thirdly, we must be loyal, honest, and friendly. Every boy always need loyalty from his couple, it may be is not make a fair with the other boy. And if we talk something must be honest as like say "I love you too" . We must be friendly, because every boy comfort whit his couple who is always friendly. And the next we must struggle pray to our god. Because if we always pray him, god willing we can do it without any trouble and obstacle. So, we need good strategy to get good boy.

Organizing, writing

* hand body * detergen
- citra ` - attact
- vaseline - boom
- marina - daia
- pons - cemerlang
- sari ayu - rinso
* parfum - wow
- viveeel - total
- eskulin - bukrim
- sweet 17 * body foam
- sari ayu - biore
- puccel - lux
- she - citra
* lightening cream - lifeboy
- pons - mustika ratu
- sari ayu * softener
- viva - softener soklin
- olay - molto
* powder - soklin pewangi
- mars * candy
- pixy - alpenible
- viva - fox
* paste - frutella
- pepsodent - kopiko
- ciptadent * snack
- close up - taro
- formula - turbo
* soap - slayolay
- give - oreo
- lux - serena
- lifeboy- tango
- harmony- gary
* tooth brush - tictac
- formula
- pepsodent family
- ciptadent
* shampoo
- emeron
- rejoice
- sunslik
- clear
* cocolate * noodle
- chocolatos - sedap mie
- silverqueen - sarimi
- timtam - super mie
- cuky bar - indomie
* ice cream - mie duo
- conello - mie bihun
- walls - mie gelas
- conserto * beverage
- campina - frutea
* fry oil - greentea
- bimoli - mizone
- kunci mas - pocary sweat
- sania * milk
- sanco - frisian flag
- filma - dancow

Swalayan Dinoyo

There are many kinds of thing in Swalayan Dinoyo. For example hand body lotion, shampoo, snack, beverage, etc. Everyone always needs something to use that product. Everyday many people visit Swalayan Dinoyo. If we need some bath equepment, it has kinds of paste, shampoo, soap, tooth brush, etc. If we need some cosmetic there are many kins of hand body, lightening cream, etc. Beside the serving is very good, there security ready to looking out us everywhere. As we know that place is very comfortable to our shopping. So we can find everything to life in Swalayan Dinoyo.

Minggu, 19 Oktober 2008

TUGAS REVISI WRITING

BEFORE

Industry Music Indonesia

There are many new groups band ai Indonesia. For example D'masiv, Seventeen, Kangen Band, RAN, Alexa etc. They are very popular in our country. Its can be good example to another people who want to make a new band and to be succes. In our country, band is one of activity who most popular. Because, a famous band often publish in television or infotainment show. From this a famous band can get many talk show everywhere ,and also has much money. That fact show that indonesia has many youth active in music. New band is new song is new creativity. Beside new creativity, band also become one of jobs who most popular in our country. So, industr music in Indonesia as like a new job for yourth.

AFTER

Industry music Indonesia

There are many new groups band in Indonesia. For example D' masiv, Seventeen, Kangen Band, RAN, Alexa etc.In our country band is one of activity who most popular. it can be good example for another people who want to make a new band to be success. To be a famous band often show in everywhere like television or infotainment. That fact show in Indonesia has many youth active in music. New band is new song , new song is new creativity.

TUGAS WRITING

I.
Thwere are many activities students of University. Students of University must go to library every week or everyday, to get many idea from science. Most of them have activity at campus to be actvist. sometime students of university go to Warnet, to get new information from technologi. So, the quality of students University is very important.

II.
As student of University must be creative. So many idea to be creative students. As like How to lern? It is important. Why? because from this they can able to prepare object before they get materi, and also to keep good value. Because this era anything more progress. If they can't do this, they can't get new science. So, they must be creative.

III.
There are students of University unactive. As we know to be students of University must be struggle to lern, and must be creative. But still many studens of University can not do this, because of lazyness. so it make them unactive in that campus or class. And also because of love , as young man and young girl know well about love. Sometime they absent because go to date. So, we must care about that problem.

writingq

student of university


Students of Unisma will get lebaran holiday this week. Before
we go home, we must continue study until 5 days before lebaran. But not all can study until that day, because many students have gone home before we get holyday. There are many students of Unisma from the other island. For example from Lombok, Bali, Sumatra, Sulawesi, Kalimantan, Ambon and Madura. And they need to stay at home for a long time. Not only for the students but also for the lecturers did it too. so, in Unisma before lebaran the lecture is uneffective.