Senin, 29 Desember 2008

Revisi Essay Home schooling


Home schooling is very popular in Indonesia. Especially in the big city like Jakarta, Surabaya, etc. Most of people in the big city choose homeschooling as the education. Because homeschooling has many advantages to the people city.

Firstly, the parent can control well their children. They can know all of the activity their children without any trouble. Why? Because, it studies at home. The parent feel efficient time, because they without company go to school and the children just wait for their teacher come to home. And than it is very comfortable for their children. House is favorite place for their children. So the parent are not worried about health’s children, because house is protective place. The last parent can know the schedule and they also can manage the schedule. Usually most of parents confuse about time because the children have job like artist. So, they can manage time for study self.

Secondly, student can more understand well. Crowded can be influence for inelegancy and study need silence. So, study alone is very effective improve them. For example, students have many knowledge. Because teachers give some extra subject matter and extra exercise for their children. Than students is more creative. Teachers give their not only for matters but also play or game to improve the intelligences. So, they have many imagine.

The last, it is without school regulation like formal school like time, schedule, etc. in homeschooling, students without wear uniform like formal school. They can wear T-shirt, jeans, hair color and long hear for boy. Than, students are more relax. They can’t nervous study with their children. They can make joke as like friends.

Homeschooling is very help to the people city. More and more for parents who has children naughty boy, young artist, someone who has serious ill. So, homescooling is very adventages for them.


T : New year

TS : New year is good time to change our life.


I.We have remember what we were do

* We begin to realize our mistake

* we must correct our mistake

* We must ask forgive to everyone who knows us

II. We arrange program our future

*We struggle to always positive thinking

*We must improve our attitude

Many people wait for new year. More and more young man and young women are very happy yard to sow fire flower. They are not only celebrate new year but also they have new life. Because new year is good time to change our life.

Firstly, we must remember what we were do. In the past time we did anything about positive and negative activity. So, we begin to realize our mistake. During a year we have many mistake so we must realize. What we were do last time. And than we must correct our mistake. We correct problem one by one. For example we ask to our friends. Next we must ask forgive to our friends, family etc. Because they always company life us, so we indirect have many mistake.

Secondly, we arrange program our future. We must have it, because it is very important to life. So, we always remember the commitment. For example we struggle to always positive thinking. Positive thinking must be Principe our life. If we always positive thinking we will have many friends and we don’t have enemy. And of course we always protected by Allah SWT. Next we must improve our attitude. Good attitude is key of life success. Good attitude come from our heart selves. For example we must always honest, kind, always help someone who has problem etc.

New year is good time to change everything especially for our heart. But don’t forget we must always remember what we were do. And we must continue our life with our arrange, like we must always positive thinking and we must improve our attitude.

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